Just the Right Words

If they’re not right, revise.

After the title has attracted the interest of potential readers, you depend on your subtitle to entice them to begin reading your text. But these second-most important words you write don’t always come automatically. Sometimes your subtitle needs a second opinion … or a third.

For the Model A Ford magazine I produce, I just edited an article about … Continue reading

More Than a Month’s Work

Don’t expect an instant novel.

Several friends on Facebook have been posting about working to write a novel this November.

It’s great to see their determination and progress. I just hope they realize that at the end of the month, their novel won’t be done.

They may have a first draft, even a good first draft, but it’s won’t yet be a polished novel. For nearly … Continue reading

First Draft Dissatisfaction

At first it looked good.

I learned about the project Friday morning. The organization I work for needed a half- and a full-page ad for another publication. Did I have something?

No, I didn’t, but now I had an assignment. So I got to work. A year ago I’d created something similar. That gave me a starting point. At an event last … Continue reading