Put ONLY in Its Place

A word’s placement makes a difference.

I have a beef with Safeway. They may know groceries, but they struggle with word order.

I cringe every time I hear this line in their radio ad: “Safeway only sells U.S.D.A. choice beef.”

What’s wrong with that? The placement of the word only.

In English, … Continue reading

The Latest Style

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by Andy Scheer

I’m ready to replace one of my most-used reference books. While I’ll keep my Chicago Manual of Style, 16th edition, and my 11th edition Merriam Webster’s Collegiate Dictionary, I’ll upgrade my Christian Writer’s Manual of Style.

I’ve been using the third edition since 2004. Considering all … Continue reading

Does Your Novel Have a Hook?

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by Andy Scheer

The first sentence told me the novel was in trouble. The rest of the paragraph confirmed that. And the second paragraph was no better.

Fortunately, the author had sent me the genre novel for a critique. So I was able to show her where … Continue reading