Have you worked to ensure their interest?
I looked forward to that novel. But as hard as I tried, I couldn’t finish it.
In theory, I should have enjoyed the story. I’d read all the previous books in the series and was attracted to this one’s topic.
But the author’s technique kept me at arm’s length from the events and characters. Worse, the story felt disjointed, as if segments had been spliced in. Rather than an organic whole, it felt like something indifferently assembled.
The author’s technique kept me at arm’s length
from the events and characters.
This past week, I picked up the latest novel by another author I respected. Earlier I’d decided not to buy it because of the subject matter. But I happened across it at the library.
I started reading it. And kept reading.
The author immediately drew me in — and kept me there. He knew his craft and immersed me in the tale.
Intriguing settings, characters, and story elements may draw a prospective reader toward a novel. But without solid technique, don’t expect readers to stay with you.