Must You Write Tightly?

Don’t try this in your initial draft.

Forget tight writing and let your book’s first draft flow. Then practice tight editing. As Strunk & White advise in The Elements of Style, retain only those words that earn their keep. No freeloaders.

In the process you’ll find many candidates for deletion.

  • Replace adverb and adjective phrases with vigorous verbs and evocative nouns.
  • Zap empty expressions, such … Continue reading

Post-Conference Tasks

You can maximize the event — after the fact.

I’m home from the writers conference, but I still have  work to do.

Late Sunday, after a ten-hour drive, I unloaded the car, unpacked my bags, and went to bed early. But I still have actions to take. Monday morning, I made a short list.

I’ve … Continue reading

5 Ws for Social Media

Remember to give readers essential orientation.

If you post on social media but never studied journalism, you might benefit from this essential of good reporting: the Five Ws.

Even those who skim your post will get the big idea if you immediately give these five key facts:

  • Who
  • What
  • Where
  • When
  • Why

Provide all five, and people won’t miss the gist of what you … Continue reading